GRE考试形式:中国大陆地区、香港、澳门、韩国目前执行分开考试的形式。由机考(分析性写作)和笔试(语文、数学)组成。 Argument 30 The article entitled 'Eating Iron' in last month's issue of Eating for Health reported that a recent study found a correlation between high levels of iron in the diet and an increased risk of heart disease. Further, it is well established that there is a link between large amounts of red meat in the diet and heart disease, and red meat is high in iron. On the basis of the study and the well-established link between red meat and heart disease, we can conclude that the correlation between high iron levels and heart disease, then, is most probably a function of the correlation between red meat and heart disease. The following appeared as a letter to the editor of a national newspaper. In this argument the author dtes a study correlating the amount of iron in a person's diet with 173 the person's risk of heart disease. The author also cites a well-established correlation between diets that indude large amounts of red meat, which is high in iron, and the incidence of heart disease. The author concludes that the correlation observed in the study is a function of the correlation between read meat and heart disease. This argument suffers from a series of poor assumptions, which render it wholly unpersuasive as it stands. To begin with, the author provides no evidence that the study's results are statistically reliable. In order to establish a strong correlation between dietary iron and heart disease, the study's sample must be suffident in size and representative of the overall population of heart-disease victims. Lacking evidence of a suffidenfly representative sample, the author cannot justifiably rely on the study to draw any conclusion whatsoever. Even assuming that the study is statistically reliable, a direct correlation between a high-iron diet and heart disease does not necessarily prove that the former causes the latter. While a high correlation is strong evidence of a causal relationship, in itself it is not suffident. The author must also account for all other possible factors leading to heart disease, such as genetic propensity, amount of exercise, and so forth. Lacking evidence that the heart-disease sufferers whom the study observed were similar in all such respects, the author cannot justifiably conclude that a high-iron diet is the primary cause, or even a contributing cause, of heart disease. Similarly, a correlation between a diet, which includes large amounts of red meat and heart disease, does not necessarily infer a causal relationship. Lacking evidence to the contrary, it is possible that red-meat eaters are comparatively likely to incur heart disease due to factors that have nothing to do with the amount of red meat in their diet. Perhaps red-meat eaters are the same people who generally overeat, and it is obesity rather the consumption of red meat specifically that causes heart attacks. The author must consider and eliminate this and other possible reasons why red-meat eaters are more likely than other people to suffer from heart disease. Otherwise, I cannot accept the author's implidt daim that eating red meat is any more likely to cause heart disease than eating other foods. Even assuming that a high-iron diet, including a diet high in red meat, promotes heart disease, the author cannot reasonably conclude that this causal relationship fully explains the study's results. The author overlooks the possibility that other foods are also high in iron, and that the study's participants ate these other foods as well as, or instead of, red meat. Without accounting for this possibility the author cannot convincingly conclude from the study that red meat is the chief cause of heart disease. 感谢您阅读《GRE作文范文大全(105) 》一文,出国留学网(liuxue86.com)编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。
GRE考试形式:中国大陆地区、香港、澳门、韩国目前执行分开考试的形式。由机考(分析性写作)和笔试(语文、数学)组成。 Argument 30 The article entitled 'Eating Iron' in last month's issue of Eating for Health reported that a recent study found a correlation between high levels of iron in the diet and an increased risk of heart disease. Further, it is well established that there is a link between large amounts of red meat in the diet and heart disease, and red meat is high in iron. On the basis of the study and the well-established link between red meat and heart disease, we can conclude that the correlation between high iron levels and heart disease, then, is most probably a function of the correlation between red meat and heart disease. The following appeared as a letter to the editor of a national newspaper. In this argument the author dtes a study correlating the amount of iron in a person's diet with 173 the person's risk of heart disease. The author also cites a well-established correlation between diets that indude large amounts of red meat, which is high in iron, and the incidence of heart disease. The author concludes that the correlation observed in the study is a function of the correlation between read meat and heart disease. This argument suffers from a series of poor assumptions, which render it wholly unpersuasive as it stands. To begin with, the author provides no evidence that the study's results are statistically reliable. In order to establish a strong correlation between dietary iron and heart disease, the study's sample must be suffident in size and representative of the overall population of heart-disease victims. Lacking evidence of a suffidenfly representative sample, the author cannot justifiably rely on the study to draw any conclusion whatsoever. Even assuming that the study is statistically reliable, a direct correlation between a high-iron diet and heart disease does not necessarily prove that the former causes the latter. While a high correlation is strong evidence of a causal relationship, in itself it is not suffident. The author must also account for all other possible factors leading to heart disease, such as genetic propensity, amount of exercise, and so forth. Lacking evidence that the heart-disease sufferers whom the study observed were similar in all such respects, the author cannot justifiably conclude that a high-iron diet is the primary cause, or even a contributing cause, of heart disease. Similarly, a correlation between a diet, which includes large amounts of red meat and heart disease, does not necessarily infer a causal relationship. Lacking evidence to the contrary, it is possible that red-meat eaters are comparatively likely to incur heart disease due to factors that have nothing to do with the amount of red meat in their diet. Perhaps red-meat eaters are the same people who generally overeat, and it is obesity rather the consumption of red meat specifically that causes heart attacks. The author must consider and eliminate this and other possible reasons why red-meat eaters are more likely than other people to suffer from heart disease. Otherwise, I cannot accept the author's implidt daim that eating red meat is any more likely to cause heart disease than eating other foods. Even assuming that a high-iron diet, including a diet high in red meat, promotes heart disease, the author cannot reasonably conclude that this causal relationship fully explains the study's results. The author overlooks the possibility that other foods are also high in iron, and that the study's participants ate these other foods as well as, or instead of, red meat. Without accounting for this possibility the author cannot convincingly conclude from the study that red meat is the chief cause of heart disease. 感谢您阅读《GRE作文范文大全(105) 》一文,出国留学网(liuxue86.com)编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。