12年gre作文要求:GRE作文Argument145详解

2012-01-27 00:20:31 详解
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What is more, it is incorrect to advise them to do more exercises by the arguer, too. Firstly, as the same reason mentioned above, there is no necessary relationship between those who snore with their exercise habit because it is kept unknown whether they do exercises enough or insufficiently or too much. Secondly, is the fact suitable for all snoring people that they take pains of sleep apnea? The word used by the arguer “many” should not be misunderstood as “all” randomly. Moreover, granted that sleep apnea makes all snoring people too tired to exercise, it is well likely to make the sense even worse if they are forced to do more exercise under such a feeble physical situation, even cause them in dangers especially without doctors’ direction. In brief, more exercises would probably not be an advice as good as the arguer states for the snoring people’s health.

In conclusion, the flaws represented above do weaken the arguer's reasoning. His/her suggestion would not be acceptable until more information about the actual relationship between people’s snoring habit and their health situation is provided. And more exact studies about the food amount they take every day and the extent of their exercise should be waged as well.

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