GRE考试形式：中国大陆地区、香港、澳门、韩国目前执行分开考试的形式。由机考（分析性写作）和笔试（语文、数学）组成。 In the second place, the mere fact that the rate of cure at the Saluda hospital is higher than at MegaviUe's hospital proves nothing about the quality of care at either hospital. It is entirely possible that more Saluda patients suffer from curable problems than Megaville patients do. Without considering this possibility the author cannot justifiably rely on curerates to draw any conclusions about comparative quality of care. In the third place, a higher employee-patient ratio at Saluda is weak evidence of either better care or greater efficiency. Common sense informs me that it is the competence of each employee, not the number of employees, that determines overall q, ality of care. Besides, it is entirely possible that the comparatively large staff at Saluda is the result of organizational inefficiency, and that a smaller staff of more effective, better managed people would provide better care. Finally, the mere fact that the Saluda hospital receives fewer patient complaints than MegaviUe's hospital proves nothing about either efficiency or quality of care. Even though the number of complaints is smaller, the percentage of patients complaining might be higher. Also, MegaviUe's staff might openly encourage patient feedback while Saluda's does not. This scenario accords with my observation that for-profit organizations are generally more concerned with customer satisfaction than non-profit organizations are. In sum, the facts that the story cites amount to weak evidence that the Saluda hospital provides more efficient, better-quality care than Megaville's hospital. To strengthen the argument, the author must provide dear evidence that at the Saluda hospital patients are released earlier because they have received better care--rather than for some other reason. To better assess the argument, I would need to compare the percentage of MegaviUe's hospital patients who suffer from curable problems with the percentage of Saluda patients who suffer 238 from similar problems. Also, I would need more information from each hospital about complaint procedures and the percentage of patients who lodge complaints. Argument 89 The following appeared as a letter to the editor of a farming publication. "With continuing publicity about the need for healthful diets, and with new research about the harmful effects of eating too much sugar, nationwide demand for sugar will no doubt decline. Therefore, farmers in our state should use the land on which they currently grow sugar cane to grow peanuts, a food that is rich in protein and low in sugar. Farmers in the neighboring country of Palin greatly increased their production of peanuts last year, and their total revenues from that crop were quite high." 感谢您阅读《GRE作文范文大全（136） 》一文，出国留学网(liuxue86.com)编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。
GRE考试形式：中国大陆地区、香港、澳门、韩国目前执行分开考试的形式。由机考（分析性写作）和笔试（语文、数学）组成。 In the second place, the mere fact that the rate of cure at the Saluda hospital is higher than at MegaviUe's hospital proves nothing about the quality of care at either hospital. It is entirely possible that more Saluda patients suffer from curable problems than Megaville patients do. Without considering this possibility the author cannot justifiably rely on curerates to draw any conclusions about comparative quality of care. In the third place, a higher employee-patient ratio at Saluda is weak evidence of either better care or greater efficiency. Common sense informs me that it is the competence of each employee, not the number of employees, that determines overall q, ality of care. Besides, it is entirely possible that the comparatively large staff at Saluda is the result of organizational inefficiency, and that a smaller staff of more effective, better managed people would provide better care. Finally, the mere fact that the Saluda hospital receives fewer patient complaints than MegaviUe's hospital proves nothing about either efficiency or quality of care. Even though the number of complaints is smaller, the percentage of patients complaining might be higher. Also, MegaviUe's staff might openly encourage patient feedback while Saluda's does not. This scenario accords with my observation that for-profit organizations are generally more concerned with customer satisfaction than non-profit organizations are. In sum, the facts that the story cites amount to weak evidence that the Saluda hospital provides more efficient, better-quality care than Megaville's hospital. To strengthen the argument, the author must provide dear evidence that at the Saluda hospital patients are released earlier because they have received better care--rather than for some other reason. To better assess the argument, I would need to compare the percentage of MegaviUe's hospital patients who suffer from curable problems with the percentage of Saluda patients who suffer 238 from similar problems. Also, I would need more information from each hospital about complaint procedures and the percentage of patients who lodge complaints. Argument 89 The following appeared as a letter to the editor of a farming publication. "With continuing publicity about the need for healthful diets, and with new research about the harmful effects of eating too much sugar, nationwide demand for sugar will no doubt decline. Therefore, farmers in our state should use the land on which they currently grow sugar cane to grow peanuts, a food that is rich in protein and low in sugar. Farmers in the neighboring country of Palin greatly increased their production of peanuts last year, and their total revenues from that crop were quite high." 感谢您阅读《GRE作文范文大全（136） 》一文，出国留学网(liuxue86.com)编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。
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