2012GRE作文范文:历年GRE考试Issue主题范文及评析23
Idisagreewiththeportionofthe"Specialistsofallkindsarehighlyoverated"statement.Specialistsarepersonswhotakecareofcertaintasksoraspecificareaofwhateverthecasemaybe.Thesepersonscontibutemoretimeandeffortthanthosewithgeneraltitles.thespecialistsaretheoneswhocantellorgivetheclientmoredetailsonwhatishappeningtothem.Thegeneralistcanonlygivebroadideaswhichcanbeanumberofthings.Thespecialistnarrowstheideasdowntothespecifics.Forexampleifonegoestoa"generalpractionerdoctor"forpainsinthechestarea,hewouldtelltheclientthatthepoblemmaybeheartburns,orsomethingelsethat’snotbesoserious,dependingonthesymptoms.Hemayalsoreferhimtoacardiologisttobesureit’snotanythingelse.ThepointI’mmakingisthatspecialistarepeoplewhocanhelpusoutevenmorethatourgeneralist.Alsothefactthatonewouldgotoaspecialistonlyindireneeds.
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Theresponsepresentsapositionontheissuebutthedevelopmentofthatpositionisseriouslyflawed.
Thewriterbeginsbydisagreeingwiththeassertionthat"specialists...arehighlyover-rated"andthenattemptstodefineandcontrastspecialistsandgeneralists.Theattemptisunsuccessful,partlybecausethedescriptionsarevagueandill-conceived.
Whereastheexampleofgoingtoa"generalpractitionerdoctor"iscertainlyrelevant,thewriter’sclaimthatageneralpractitionerwouldtellapatientwithchestpainsthattheproblem"maybeheartburnsorsomethingelsethat’snotsoserious"seemsfar-fetched.
Theresponseisfurtherweakenedbypoorwordchoiceandbynumerouserrorsinsentencestructure,usage,andgrammar.Theseproblems,whilenotsevereenoughtoseriouslyinterferewithmeaning,contributetotheoverallratingof"2." 感谢您阅读《历年GRE考试Issue主题范文及评析23 》一文,出国留学网(liuxue86.com)编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。
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