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2012-01-27 08:24:23
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The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.

"A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away; thus, the proposed new jazz club in Monroe, the C-Note, would have the local market all to itself. Plus, jazz is extremely popular in Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's annual jazz festival last summer; several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe; and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight at 7 P.M. Finally, a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment."

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

中文翻译:

在Monroe 建立爵士乐俱乐部将会是非常盈利的产业。当前,最近的爵士俱乐部也在65 英里以外;因此,我们筹建的俱乐部C Note 将会占有全部的本地市场。而且,爵士乐在Monroe 非常流行:去年夏天10 万多人参加了Monroe 的爵士音乐节,若干知名爵士音乐家居住在Monroe,Monroe 获评价最高的广播节目是平时每天播出的Jazz Nightly.最后,一项全国性研究表明典型的爵士爱好者每年花费近1000 元用于爵士娱乐。

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